Close your eyes

Close your eyes

A Poem by ron

Close your eyes

 

Close your eyes as we place the palms of our hands together.

Now breathe slowly, deeply, feel the warmth of our hands.

 

Part your lips just a little, come closer but don’t make them touch.

I want us to feel the heat but not the touch,

at least not just yet.

 

Now we trace each others face with your fingers,

remember don’t touch just yet.

 

Can you feel what the eyes never see?

Do you feel the true us needing more than just words?

 

© 2014 ron


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Very sensual. I love the in between lines that it sets. Great great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pattie.
That is really awesome...I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you loved it.
This is nice.Sometimes it is nice to just touch in anticipation of more :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidja. Yes it is :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on January 25, 2014
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ron
ron

Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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