To write of Love

To write of Love

 

Where to begin...

Love in its infancy is like a blank page begging to be filled.

 

What shall I write or paint that would show this true heart of mine?

Would you help me paint it or write sweet words?

 

Would you run from the sheer gravity of my heart as I wear it on my sleeve?

Or will you embrace me with all that you have?

 

Be still my beating heart, least it betray my true intentions.

I dare not speak of what I truly feel, I lock it away for fear it will be seen.

 

My fingers ache to touch yours,

My heart beats its lonely tune,

My passions I keep to my self, never being brave enough to be known.

 

I dare not look in your eyes,

how could I, they might not like what they see.

 

Be still my beating heart,

how could you ever know love.

Reviews

[Ivory'lee]

You inspire me to write, thanks I was in quite a funk.

[ron]

I am honored that I inspire you Ivory.

[Rita L. Sev]

Would you run from the sheer gravity of my heart as I wear it on my sleeve?

Great line in this emotive piece, Ron.

[ron]

Thank you so much Rita. I'm glade you read me.

[Linda alexander]

So hard to write a review on this, there are so many souls tried this act in life and positively and negatively affected, after all we all all fragile humans

[ron]

Yes we are Linda. it does give writers (even as bad as me) something to work with. Can you imagine a deer or buffalo writing something...oh that just gave me an idea for a new approach to writing something, I wounder what an animal (besides humans) would write?

[Linda alexander]

Spontanous thinking great keep going

[ron]

Well in answering your review it came to me, so in a way you inspired the idea. Thank you.

[Linda alexander]

You welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"I dare not look in your eyes,

how could I, they might not like what they see.



Be still my beating heart,

how could you ever know love."

Simply amazing...:)........................

[ron]

Thank you Sami. I'm still trying to write in a way that expresses how I feel deep inside.

[Sami Khalil]

You did...You are welcome...:)..................

[ron]

They all seem incomplete some how. Like they are missing that pure hungry emotion, the one just beyond the edge of desire, love, passion.

[Sami Khalil]

:).......................