Fallen Star on petals of love

Fallen Star on petals of love

 

Night time brings thoughts of romance as falling stars shoot across the sky.

Tails so bright they inspire passion to take control.

 

Passion's dust falling on the petals of love.

Would you open your petals to the sprinkling of my love?

 

How warm the petals are,

That contains your passion.

 

Soft kisses of the falling star,

Caress your petals in my star dust of love.

 

By the moon lights gaze,

Your petals open and blossom ever so slowly.

 

Lovingly I sprinkle the dust of my shooting star.

Shyly I will love you from afar.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A sweet poem. I would take out the "the" in the first line "as falling stars ..." and add an apostrophe for passion's - nice write.

[ron]

Thank you KL. I fixed the typos you mentioned.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome. Anytime my friend. Have a great rest of the holiday season.

[ron]

You to KL.

[Latifa]

Shyly I will love you from afar.
thi line is so sweet and lovely and so as the rest of the poem Ron great job

[ron]

Thank you Latifa.

[ron]

Thank you Latifa :)

[Cody Williams]

An excellent poem Ron! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[ron]

Thank you Cody and you are most welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such velvety soft romantic emotions expressed beautifully, Ron. A bit poignant...loving someone from afar is not easy, is it? I enjoyed this one very much. Lydi**

[ron]

Thank you Lydia.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmmmm. Your romantic side is showing my friend.This is a sweetly sweet poem. One dreams about being loved like this. Merry Christmas sweetie have a great day:)

[ron]

Merry Christmas to you to Vidja. -blushing- is it showing that much?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes it shows splendidly you wear it well.:)

[ron]

Thank you dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

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[Sami Khalil]

You have sprinkled extra beauty on the subject of love. A love song...:)..............

[ron]

Why thank you kind poet. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................