Fallen Star on petals of love

Fallen Star on petals of love

 

Night time brings thoughts of romance as falling stars shoot across the sky.

Tails so bright they inspire passion to take control.

 

Passion's dust falling on the petals of love.

Would you open your petals to the sprinkling of my love?

 

How warm the petals are,

That contains your passion.

 

Soft kisses of the falling star,

Caress your petals in my star dust of love.

 

By the moon lights gaze,

Your petals open and blossom ever so slowly.

 

Lovingly I sprinkle the dust of my shooting star.

Shyly I will love you from afar.

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Amazing write! Thanks for sharing. Loved the flow of this

[ron]

Thank you Fluttershy. I always like when you visit.

[lily]

Probably one of my favorite pieces of yours, well done! :)
This is such a gorgeous piece, Ron.

[ron]

Thank you Lily, I am very happy that you like it.

[Justsimplyjulia]

sooooo beautiful. So passionate and beautiful.
I am again at awe at your skill.
-Dragon

[ron]

I blush from your words Dragonheart. I am humbled. Thank you so much for your kind words dear reader. I hope that my writings never fail to bring your kind reviews.

[Justsimplyjulia]

They never will Ron. One does not simply "loose" a talent as great as yours! ;)
-Dragon

[ron]

You are to kind thank you.

[s y e]

Aaaah Ron, this is wonderful. I loved it.

[ron]

Thank you Sye.

[Ivory'lee]

I love this one. :) Your work as always inspires my own. :)

[ron]

You are to kind Ivory. :)

[Winter Renee Vineyard]

Aww it's sweet......good write!!!!

[ron]

Thank you Renee.

[TurtleClark]

This made me smile. Its sweet

[ron]

Thank you darkgoddess.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Really enjoyed the concept of this piece. Written for every hopeless romantic amongst us... great write.

[ron]

Thank you poetic.

[Frieda P]

"Would you open your petals to the sprinkling of my love?" Oi vey, that's a mouthful ron! Not to mention sprinkling the dust of your shooting star, you must be eating your Wheaties! Clever one my friend. Happy New Year.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. -blushing-

[FlatLineBeauty]

Sensual and romantic. A very soft side. xo Winter

[ron]

Thank you Amanda. xo