Who we are

Who we are

 

Gunfire on the walls; shadows of past sins.

How the holes expose us all.

 

Hidden behind the ravages of time.

Would you look at me?

 

Could you stand the scares that hide who I am?

Would you hold me?

 

Bullet holes hide who we are.

Could you tell me who I am?

 

Could you at least tell me why?

Could you look in the faces of those who are here?

 

Could you tell them why?

Could you tell them why?

 

Do not beg for what is not possible.

Ask us what we can do.

 

Ask us and I will promise this…

We will rise up and take what is ours!!

Reviews

[Ruth]

I guess it is difficult to see through the eyes of someone who has seen their way of life and all we can do is empathise, the best we can, insightful work x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you are very right ron you should rise up and take what is yours.This is soo heartfelt and i thank you for penning.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome ron

[MandaBear]

Sounds like a battle cry! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! haha Great work!

[ron]

I guess it is in a way Amanda. Thank you.

[Mizo4]

Really like this very insightful and imagery that is brought is great.

[ron]

Thank you Maron.

[ron]

*Marion*..

[Mizo4]

no problemo

[Sami Khalil]

Those holes and trenches tell alot about our life's battles and the possibilities of victory or defeat. But we have to sacrifice for the good cause and not the bad ones...A powerful write here...:)................

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................