My finale release

My finale release

A Poem by ron

My finale release

 

It burns deep in me,

This feeling, this need.

 

I succumb to it every night,

It makes my heart beat faster.

 

This feeling, this need,

It takes hold of me and will not let me go.

 

It is my Mistress, this emotion deep inside,

It calls to me and begs for my finale release.

© 2013 ron


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i can feel the way the heart beats faster and faster at the thought that does so intrigue it... i really enjoyed this write ron!
-Ron

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Dragonheart.
Wow very sensual there ron!

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you Amanda. The feeling for this one just came over me and I had to write it down.
I like the title and this idea about the final release. That sounds like a good title for a movie or a book......Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sami.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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Added on November 14, 2013
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ron

Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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