Trust

I know this is not the best poem written. But its raw and its forward with no frills attached.

Trust

 

A lot of poems are written about trust,

Some are erotic and romance and stuff.

 

To me trust came when I had to have my friends back.

It became more important when I went in the Army.

 

It was a matter of life and death and so much more.

No matter what our darkest secrets we held, it was trust that was given when it all went to hell.

 

We could count on each other,

No matter if you liked the person.

 

It was trust that no matter what,

We would all make it back.

 

If someone fell behind on a run,

Or couldn’t keep up on the road marches, (That were never much fun).

 

You turned around and picked them all up,

And returned as one. (No solider left behind).

 

Now don’t get me wrong, not everyone liked each other,

But you knew your buddy had your back when you were face to face with hell.

~~~~~

Or just a bar fight.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

this poem is very serious and honest about the things that matter to you .This is very heartfelt Ron about trusting someone with your life.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya.

[Candy M]

This was so serious, and then the end made me smile! I think it's good, especially because of the humor at the end -- part of trust is knowing that life can't be taken too seriously!

[ron]

Thank you Candy. Oh it was all serious, we knew we had each others back no matter if it was a bar fight or worse.

[MandaBear]

Very unique poem I like it =)

[Sami Khalil]

A great look and unique one on trust...Bravo..............

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)............