Loves awaited Answer

Loves awaited Answer

 

 

Flowers blooming begins,

Mornings dew no longer frozen upon the branches.

 

Horizons sun peaks to chase away,

The nights shadow.

 

Birds chirp morning greetings,

Butterflies burst from long winter cocoons.

 

Would you heart be as kind?

Free me from my winter sleep.

 

Let springtime’s shine thaw your answer,

That has slept its winter slumber.

 

Or driver the dagger that has made widowers of young hearts,

Deep into my soul.

 

Lest your love take its next victim,

And dance upon the fire that once burned so bright.

 

Crush hot coals now turned to cold ashes,

And allow my mind to never feel this pain again.

 

~~~~~

I beg your answer…I beg.

~~~~~

 

Let not the executioners axe hang in mid air,

A moment longer.  

Reviews

[Ivory'lee]

Oh, well I love it. It's beautifully written.


XOXOX

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. XOXOX

[Ivory'lee]

You are very welcome my friend!!!

[Me]

beautifully done Ron, enjoyed :) x

[ron]

Thank you Raven :) x

[Maskedthoughts]

I love the format of the poem and the imagery! Well done!

[ron]

Thank you so much.

[Latifa]

This poem is amazing Ron great job

[ron]

Thank you Latifa

[Cody Williams]

A great poem Ron! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[ron]

Thank you Cody.

[MandaBear]

The imagery was awesome. I felt so many emotions. Great Job!

[ron]

Thank you Amanda.

[Ruth]

Potent imagery hon and I felt this...the tension...the wanting, yearning...and need x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth x

[Kitten]

magnificent! The imagery you created and how you related them to the aspects of love is sweet :) lovely poem, couldn't be better!

[ron]

Thank you Kitten. You are most kind.

[Kitten]

of course mister Ron :)

[ron]

Mister Ron...that's a bit formal lol :)

[Dreamer]

it is indeed hard wondering if the one you love feels the same way... in fact I'm dealing with that currently myself...excellent work

[ron]

Thank you. Do you feel as if they feel the same way about you?

[Dreamer]

I don't really know... he makes it kind of hard to tell

[ron]

I know the feeling. It is hard sometimes to know how someone feels about you. All you can do is drop hints and see how he reacts and answers.

[Dreamer]

our situation makes it kind of hard to find out...

[ron]

I understand. I think I am going through the same thing. Just not sure and a little confused.

[Dreamer]

confusion... that's exactly how I feel

[ron]

I know. Its hard but you will get through this I promise.

[Dreamer]

thanks... I hope your right

[Vidya Bacchus]

wow .This is a terrific poem.It is hard wondering if the one you love feels the same way about you.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. yes it is.