The Secret

The Secret

 

Let the masks fall,

Close your eyes and tell me in your mind…

What are your desires, your needs,

Your deepest secrets.

 

Could you be honest with your inner voice?

Would you follow it in the moonlight of your mind?

 

Under the full moons light, in the forests clearing,

Whisper them to me.

 

I will wait until you trust me,

I will prove to you I am worthy, to hear your secrets.

 

Until then, here is but a small one from me…

.~.~.~.~.~.~.

 

Did you hear it?

My secret floated on the gentle breeze,

Like butterfly wings landing next to your imagination.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I can hear you speaking to me in heavenly and dreamy voice, Ron. I almost drifted to sleep. And that's a compliment, anyway. ;)

[ron]

Thank you Blue. ;)

[Hatchling]

Beautiful poem Ron! I enjoyed reading this

[ron]

Thank you Fluttershy.

[Hatchling]

You're welcome

[Chidoriflower]

This is beautiful. :3 It has a lovely magic in it. :)

[ron]

Thank you Chidoriflower.

[Ruth]

Lovely finale to this! It takes time to trust another with desires, powerful piece x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth. Yes it odes take time to trust. I have never trusted anyone enough to tell some of my deepest secret desires to.

[Laminators Dubai]

Wait why whisper? Shout is loud......lol^^

[ron]

I say whisper so only I will hear...kind of our little secret.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Provocative and sensual writing. "Like butterfly wings landing next to your imagination." A beautiful line!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon for your kind words.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, this is beautiful my friend!! The secret was carried in the breeze in such an enchanting way!!
Lovely, really lovely!!

[ron]

Thank you Sheila. You are always the lady when reviewing.

[Sami Khalil]

Masks must come down to see faces clearly...A wonderful write...:)

[ron]

Yes they must. Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)