Connecting

Connecting

 

Lost in the sounds, conflicted by feelings not found.

Taken to a place where I do not recognize myself.

 

I open myself up to what could be, maybe what will be.

The keys of the music submerse me in different shades of color.

 

Slowly I breathe and close my eyes to see who I am.

 My fingers tingle with touching you.

 

Can you feel my heart beat, does it excite you?

Do you not know my feelings?

 

This is who I am; I hope and dream for someone to share my heart with.

Would you take me in your loving embrace and show me who you are?

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Some connections are just unexplained.. Good poem Ron. thank you. shallimarRose

[ron]

You are most welcome Rose.

[Emberlorna]

"I open my up to what could be, maybe what will be.

The keys of the music submerse me in different shades of color."

Such lovely imagery.. with a smooth flowing conversational quality that is sensitively written.. beautiful and filled with such passion & depth. Really great work here :)

[ron]

Thank you or your kind review Emberlorna :)

[Laminators Dubai]

This poem is promising....not just with words but with the title too...
Cool and but fascinating.
Thanks for sharing the connection ^^

[ron]

Thank you glitch. You are most welcome.