Your Emerald Isle…kiss

Your Emerald Isle…kiss

 

So this is it. This is the one night you will change who I am.

One night, one night you tell me.

 

I follow you to the meeting place.

The place you will take me where a world makes…

Dreams, come true.

 

You lay me down on the alter and bind me to the pedestals.

You undress me with your thoughts and smile.

 

You kiss my heart and my mind starts to swirl.

Thoughts of pure bliss fill my head.

 

I wait for you to rescue my desires from the dark places it has lived.

My eyes plead for salvation, salvation that only you can save me from.

 

The road of my life is filled with potholes, cracks, and dead ends.

You came in and swept me from the sadness that consumed my life for so long.

 

Did you plan this in your mind?

Did you beg for me to stay?

Did you ever think I would come so fast?

 

What if I never answered you Emerald Isle…

Kiss?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is different for you hon. Really vivid details. much enjoyed xx

[ron]

Thank you Silver.

[Richie]

Wow, that's really good Ron. Well done man

[ron]

Thank you Richie.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Lovely start. It has that "something" that made me want to read til the end. :x

[ron]

Thank you Blue.

[shallimarRose]

"You undress me with your thoughts and smile.
You kiss my heart and my mind starts to swirl."
"The road of my life is filled with potholes, cracks, and dead ends."

"What if I never answered you Emerald Isle…Kiss?"


Wow great lines and metaphor usage. Gorgeous poem Ron, perhaps one of your best. Beautiful song. I have never heard it before.. Rose

[ron]

Thank you Rose. I just found White Horse for the first time a few days ago.

[Sami Khalil]

"I wait for you to rescue my desires from the dark places it has lived.

My eyes plead for salvation, salvation that only you can save me from.



The road of my life is filled with potholes, cracks, and dead ends.

You came in and swept me from the sadness that consumed my life for so long."

Inspired by a song to become a lovely poem. Pen on...:)

[ron]

Thank you Sami. Trying to put a video song in the poem but I don't know how.

[Sami Khalil]

Me too. Ask the ones that do it. They will help...You are welcome...:)

[ron]

Lol I think I know just the one to ask.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)