You may never see who I am

You may never see who I am

A Poem by ron

You may never see who I am

 

We are many things and many people as we learn and grow.

Many paths lead to many discoveries, some we have always known.

 

What we feel inside, we must not hide.

But for some of us the pain is too much to show.

 

How can I show you the things that haunt me?

How can I share when I do not feel like healing?

 

A pain inside is the easiest to hide.

It leaves not a single scar to be seen.

 

The scars inside are the ones that never heal.

 

You must look past my scars; I will show them to no one.

These are the things that make who I am.

 

Love me for my faults.

Do not pity me for my scars.

© 2013 ron


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Very wise words. Scars are part of who we are whether they are physical or emotional. They must be accepted by those who want to be part of our lives. One small correction...I think you wanted to say "haunt" and not "hunt" in this line. "How can I show you the things that hunt me?" A powerful write. Lydi*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I will change that right away.
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Great! I knew it was only a typo.
ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you for catching it.



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Dye
I really like this one Ron. Our past does make us who were are, every wound and scar included.

Love me for my faults, do not pity me for my scars. A true love never would. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I knew some one who did but I was to foolish to notice.
Love me for my faults.
Do not pity me for my scars.
amezing!^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you glitch.
It is difficult to move on, but we are who we are. When we are able to accept the pain and the scars we are able to ask those who know us to do the same. Though not all shall understand, we are at least being honest by admitting we have them. It is a choice another must make, but at least they know what you have endured, and who you really are!
Wise words Ron!

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I don't feel wise, but thank you.
"You must look past my scars; I will show them to no one.

These are the things that make who I am.



Love me for my faults.

Do not pity me for my scars."

With words like that she should love you and forget the scars of the past. Like you have said we have to learn and grow...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


ron

11 Years Ago

I hope so. Thank you.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Very wise words. Scars are part of who we are whether they are physical or emotional. They must be accepted by those who want to be part of our lives. One small correction...I think you wanted to say "haunt" and not "hunt" in this line. "How can I show you the things that hunt me?" A powerful write. Lydi*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I will change that right away.
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Great! I knew it was only a typo.
ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you for catching it.

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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