The Pain is not lost

The Pain is not lost

 

Feelings pouring out like a wave crashing hard.

Not enough time to put down my heart.

 

I cry while I write today, I can’t write them fast enough.

My feelings of the pain, love, and lust.

 

Is it wrong to have lust while my heart is filled with love?

As the pain of not having sinks deeper within.

 

I know its not manly to cry as I write.

But the pain in my heart will never subside.

 

They say it is better to have loved and lost.

I beg to differ it’s the pain that is not lost.

 

If only for a moment, I could know true love.

I would write to the Heavens of love I had lost.

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Ron once again I come here as witness to your vulnerability. I don't believe it is not manly to cry if the they are emotional tears from your heart and your passion. Show me a man that can cry real tears and ill show you.. well I better not show you anything.. lol
Another heartfelt and emotional write.. your pen drips tears my friend.. and that is not a bad thing.. shallimarRose

[ron]

Thank you Rose. I think if I had some one like you I would show her every thing I am...my tears would be those of joy and love. Yes tears of love. You are blessed to have some one in your life.

[shallimarRose]

Yes I know I am Ron.. You have someone too.. I wish that was not going wrong for you. Huggs ya.. read moreYes I know I am Ron.. You have someone too.. I wish that was not going wrong for you. Huggs ya..
shallimarRose

[ron]

read more?

[shallimarRose]

It cut the message off and didnt post it the read more was WC lol

[ron]

lol I'm sorry.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

People are always disheartened when I say I wept while I read their works. I explain that it is like being at a good opera or a wedding..... the energy is in all the right places ...and who says its unmanly to cry? OFF WITH THEIR HEADS! :) LOL You cry because you are capable of feeling... of living in the emotion of now, then, and the next... like every good writer does!

Not enough time to put down my heart.( is my favorite line!)

[ron]

Thank you. from behind the screen I write were no one can see my face.

[Sheila Kline]

My heart cries with you as you lament for that which you do not have. There are those who wait for what seems an eternity to find the love they seek, but do not lose faith as long as there is life there is hope for that which you desire! The Heavens would graciously accept your words!!

[ron]

You are far to kind Shelia. Maybe some one will see them and take pity on me.