You

You

A Poem by ron

You

 

I sit wondering how I should feel.

My thoughts of you fill me and make me complete.

 

Your thoughts touch me deep inside.

A touch of your whisper makes me sigh.

 

Yours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more.

Just a thought of your love quenches my thirsty soul.

 

How should I feel when you are everywhere?

You are in…

my thoughts…

my breath…

my feelings…

my desires.

 

You are deep in my heart you make me whole again.

You give me life in ways I have not lived.

© 2013 ron


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If I was gonna be straight with you I would say - you need a girl. ;) But I am reading the words and they are very tender and heartfelt sentiments.

But yes, being with a friend/mate/lover/mistress/ (toymaster ?), will always make you experience life in ways you never knew.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dw817

11 Years Ago

It's a patience and permutation thing - you just sit down with a program or a computer and experimen.. read more
ron

11 Years Ago

Ok all the computer language you just said made me dizzy lol...I'm just not wired for computers.
dw817

11 Years Ago

Permutations are good to know, not just for computers but for everything in life.
http://bit.l.. read more



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I like that line to


Yours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more.
Just a thought of your love quenches my thirsty soul.

Is my favourite part, very good I like reading this

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
ours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more.
that is a poetic hint towards stratification :) very good write

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

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