Ah, such questions, boggles more of the heart, than the mind. "What if?" indeed.
One either pushes the other away because they no longer feel the same way
(if they ever did in the first place) about the other person anymore
(Sorry, i'm pretty cynical about this subject matter.)
Or, yes, to get more breathing room, feeling suffocated, gain space, think, live,
realize they're perhaps too emotionally co-dependent on the other person?
just that some people's
feelings can tend to constantly change towards each other.
The questioning verses in this poem, makes this all the more poignant, leaving one's
heart with lingering questions. I really enjoyed this poem, great job :)
"What if we never met? Would I be the whole in your llife?"
Questions that have most likely bothered men and women for ages...
"Whet if we never said hello?" then would goodbye never be an option.
Strong emotions in this one Ron. Thank you.. shallimarRose
Ah, such questions, boggles more of the heart, than the mind. "What if?" indeed.
One either pushes the other away because they no longer feel the same way
(if they ever did in the first place) about the other person anymore
(Sorry, i'm pretty cynical about this subject matter.)
Or, yes, to get more breathing room, feeling suffocated, gain space, think, live,
realize they're perhaps too emotionally co-dependent on the other person?
just that some people's
feelings can tend to constantly change towards each other.
The questioning verses in this poem, makes this all the more poignant, leaving one's
heart with lingering questions. I really enjoyed this poem, great job :)
At times in a relationship...one pushes away to have breathing room...a time to vent and assess the situation...and the other is on standby like this verse...asking the questions...
I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..