Looking in the Shadows

Looking in the Shadows

 

Could it be so simple, could the signs be there right in front of me.

For one who sees so much I am blind to its touch.

 

I go to the shadows with the light of desire, and still the shadows reveal little.

I will sit and wait hoping for glimpses, glimpses in the shadows.

 

I hear the sounds and voices, but still no one calls to me.

Is it my need for something I cannot see that drives them away; far beyond the sea?

Reviews

[FreeSoulLoveDance]

I guess it's best not to look in the shadows but to wait for what is coming. I liked this poem :)

[ron]

It was how I feel when I'm alone even whith other people around. Like I am invisible.

[FreeSoulLoveDance]

I know what you mean

[shallimarRose]

Well You would not be the first person to not see what is right in front of them..
I enjoyed the theme here Ron and the idea that..she is close enough for you to hear "voices"
but you still cannot touch her.. xo Rose

[ron]

Aahh the story of my life...lol. Should we wait and see who comes out of the shadows to call to me? :)

[shallimarRose]

um...yes...lol

[ron]

lol. Aperently I need 10 charectres to respond lol

[shallimarRose]

lmao...you nut... hehe

[ron]

Call me Almond Joy...:)

[shallimarRose]

Well I can call you Almond but my namd is not Joy? lolol

how are you Ron?

[ron]

Im good and I find joy she just doesnt want me around all the time...lol