Free from My Prison

Free from My Prison

 

Caught between sleep and dreams, I wait for you and places you will take me.

Never knowing, always hoping you will come to release me from this prison.

 

Shackled to this earthly body, my mind cannot fly.

 I lay here in my prison free to walk in the light.

 

I will not beg or plead for you to release me; I am just a man who waits and sighs.

 Come to me, take me On your journey, and speed me away on gossamer wings.

 

As I slip in to my prison of dreams, your hand reaches out to set me free.

Take me now and let me fall, into your world so serene.

 

We travel farther into places I have never seen before.

The silver string that held me bound broke and disappeared long ago.

 

Forgotten are my woes and pains.

In this place, I shall remain.

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

"I am just a man who waits and sighs.
Come to me, take me On your journey,
and speed me away on gossamer wings."


I love your ink here Ron... This line...

"The silver string that held me bound broke and disappeared long ago."

This line to me says there is a break in the relationship in real life giving way to your dream fantasies.... Perhaps You long for something more and this mysterious dream love takes you there.. to places you can only dream of...Her gossamer wings carries you to fantasies ... Perhaps somewhere she dreams of you also and waits for you ... heavy sigh... Lovely poem. xo Rose

[ron]

Thank you Rose. Not sure why I wrote this one, it seems I am getting more of the ones that flow out like a flood more and more. Like the one I just wrote right now "Denied"

[shallimarRose]

I will look at it.. love the title already. xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dreams can imprison your pain and desires... it can build a wall of resentment, sometimes...
I love that you have expressed the beauty of her gossamer wings as your guiding light to a peaceful solace... Nicely penned! :)

[ron]

Thank you so much. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Shackled to this earthly body, my mind cannot fly.

I lay here in my prison free to walk in the light."
I hope all your wishes will come true and then walk in the light of love...A splendid poem...:)

[ron]

Thank you. I'm not sure if thats in the cards for me as of yet, but I hope it does soon.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...You are welcome...:)