The Goodbye and Hello

The Goodbye and Hello

A Story by ron

The Goodbye and Hello

 

One night it happened, quite by surprise.

Tonight when I saw you, you had a new look in your eyes.

 

We had never talked before other than goodbye and hello.

But tonight you paid for my drinks and said, “Come on lets go.”

 

You rushed us off without a word or a sigh.

You led me to a room that would soon open my eyes.

 

You stripped me naked and sat me on the bed.

Slowly you danced your cloths you did shed.

 

“I have never done this” was the shy look in your eyes.

You quietly kissed me and shuttered your sigh.

 

You showed me things that I had only dreamed about.

You took your time, and lovingly made it last all night.

 

After you finished, to the bed you soon sank.

 

After a while, I led you to the shower, you followed without a word.

After you finished you motioned for me to stay until I was done.

 

I walked out the shower hoping and thinking you would be there to fill my embrace.

The only sign of you lay on the bed; a note and your panties edged in lace.

 

I sank to the bed; laid there and read with your panties tightly in my hand.

This is how your note read.

 

“I loved you from the first time you watched me.

Your hunger for me was without compare.

I know it is your birthday but I had nothing else to give.

I hope I gave you your very first kiss.

You were completely wonderful, and you made me feel loved.

I hope I did the same for you, for your very first time.”

 

I never saw her again after that night.

I have kept the gifts she gave me.

I will always cherish that night for the rest of my life.

 

© 2013 ron


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Ron the panty-raider. *Grin* No, that's fine. I was 'offered' some panties one time. She 'accidentally' left them here. Pretty sure that was one of Rose's ventures tho. We both came across them cleaning.

It was rather amusing, she KNEW she couldn't accuse me cause I didn't know anyone at the time and of course I could immediately accuse her. All I did was hold them up to her with a smirk on my face.

Her answer was simple. "Oh, these are small."
I answered back, "Too small for you. A friend of yours ?"
She looked away, "Perhaps."
I took them in hand, "Then I guess we'll keep them should your friend return."

And of course, that friend of hers never did. I came across them recently in some boxes as I'm still unpacking stuff from my last move. I'm pretty sure I know who they belonged to as it wasn't the first nor likely the last time I would catch Rose with a fling when we lived together and I was away from my home and came home unexpectedly to find her with someone else.

I sometimes wonder - if - we get married, as this is something she said will happen in my future, and it will be with her. Will she start to fling again ? With what I've known of Rose and the brief talks I've had with Jimbo and her past infidelity, I have to say yes - yes she will.

Be glad, Ron, that you were granted these in the safety and sanctity of your home without intervention and without impeding.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dw817

11 Years Ago

Personally I'm frightened by, "the prize" men seem to seek. I'm quite content to keep things in my h.. read more
ron

11 Years Ago

You are not a bad person, you are just shy in your ways and that is something that makes you special.. read more
dw817

11 Years Ago

'Special' is not always a good thing. I remember bullies years ago saying teachers were nice to me c.. read more



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Ron the panty-raider. *Grin* No, that's fine. I was 'offered' some panties one time. She 'accidentally' left them here. Pretty sure that was one of Rose's ventures tho. We both came across them cleaning.

It was rather amusing, she KNEW she couldn't accuse me cause I didn't know anyone at the time and of course I could immediately accuse her. All I did was hold them up to her with a smirk on my face.

Her answer was simple. "Oh, these are small."
I answered back, "Too small for you. A friend of yours ?"
She looked away, "Perhaps."
I took them in hand, "Then I guess we'll keep them should your friend return."

And of course, that friend of hers never did. I came across them recently in some boxes as I'm still unpacking stuff from my last move. I'm pretty sure I know who they belonged to as it wasn't the first nor likely the last time I would catch Rose with a fling when we lived together and I was away from my home and came home unexpectedly to find her with someone else.

I sometimes wonder - if - we get married, as this is something she said will happen in my future, and it will be with her. Will she start to fling again ? With what I've known of Rose and the brief talks I've had with Jimbo and her past infidelity, I have to say yes - yes she will.

Be glad, Ron, that you were granted these in the safety and sanctity of your home without intervention and without impeding.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dw817

11 Years Ago

Personally I'm frightened by, "the prize" men seem to seek. I'm quite content to keep things in my h.. read more
ron

11 Years Ago

You are not a bad person, you are just shy in your ways and that is something that makes you special.. read more
dw817

11 Years Ago

'Special' is not always a good thing. I remember bullies years ago saying teachers were nice to me c.. read more
Wow I like this a lot.. I never know what is real and what is fake. I think this needs to be marked 18 and older though. One minor error I saw right off the bat.. You need to fix this line..
"This is how your note had read said."
I would go with
.......................... This is how your note read.

thank you for the rr Ronny.. xoxo


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rose. I changed it.

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