Life

Life

A Poem by ron

Life

 

Would a bird chirp and call you a thing?

Does a mountain roar and say many things?

 

Does a river flow and say it does not know?

Would the snow fall and become all knowing?

 

We organize life and its many disguises.

To explain what we cannot behind a disguise.

 

Life is a journey; explore it in its depth.

See and touch it, in all its glory and dephtness.

© 2013 ron


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My experience ? A bird chirps to see who all is around him. If a mountain roars, run ! (Earthquake or volcano). :) Rivers do flow but they carry the secrets of the deep. Snows fall but they can only repeat what they've heard in the air from others.

And yes, life is a journey. As Lao-tzu (Romanized as Lao-Tse) (Father of Taoism) once said, "The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step."


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

And one step shal lead to the ones after it. Thanks for the review. I had forgotten about Lao-tzu. M.. read more
dw817

11 Years Ago

Add a "T" and you have it. :)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sun_Tzu



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My experience ? A bird chirps to see who all is around him. If a mountain roars, run ! (Earthquake or volcano). :) Rivers do flow but they carry the secrets of the deep. Snows fall but they can only repeat what they've heard in the air from others.

And yes, life is a journey. As Lao-tzu (Romanized as Lao-Tse) (Father of Taoism) once said, "The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step."


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

And one step shal lead to the ones after it. Thanks for the review. I had forgotten about Lao-tzu. M.. read more
dw817

11 Years Ago

Add a "T" and you have it. :)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sun_Tzu
food for thought..??
"Life is a journey; explore it in its depth." good point.. xo Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
I like this. Though I like to think that nature is alive, bc it makes life seem more exciting:) Great poem:)!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ron

11 Years Ago

Had to change the last word from "deftness" to "depthness."
"We organize life and its many disguises.

To explain what we cannot behind a disguise.



Life is a journey; explore it in its depth.

See and touch it, in all its glory and deftness."
You are scaring me now( compliment ) You are becoming a philosopher too...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ron

11 Years Ago

Lol thank you. The first line I forgot to add bird.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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