Man going by

Man going by

 

May the Heavens and the Gods with the Goddesses by their side, stand and watch from high peaks watching as man goes by.

 

Should I cover my face and avert my eyes as they watch from their perch from high in the skies?

 

Offerings made during important seasons.

Pray to the ones that watch man going by.

 

The beginning of this poem has left someone out, much like man has he goes by.

It is the women in time that man has pushed aside.

 

So let me re-start this poem in time.

If not for the women, than man would not go by.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Truly ? I try very hard not to push someone aside. Even if they request it. And I decided long ago that woman to me means The Womb of Man, the beginning, the start, the epoch.

We come from woman. We marry woman. We engage with woman - to have child. That comes also from woman. The very miracle of L I F E.

Let no man ever forget this ... :7

[ron]

Very true.

[RainDancer1997]

greatly written:) and true:)!!

[ron]

So many great women in history have been held in the back ground.The sad things is we may never who they are.

[Keith]

We just can't do without them.

[ron]

Thank you. I agree we could not.

[Anand Sehgal]

funny representation. Loved it :)

[ron]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

Oh!!!! Excellent, loved this :) Clever work x

[ron]

Thank you. I just think that women have had more to do with history an the shaping of today than history gives them credit for.

[Ruth]

They have long been supressed, true :)

[ron]

THis is ture dear poet.

[shallimarRose]

I love this Ron...

[ron]

Aww thank you.