The question

The question

Could I sleep while you lay next to me in my thoughts, enveloping all my senses?

Could I breathe while I sleep not knowing if I will ever wake?

 

Could you control my emotions like a puppet on a string?

Could I dance to the music that you have you have infused in to my soul?

 

Would you crumple my feelings like a paper that has no meaning?

Would you write me to suit your own personal needs?

 

What will you do with my love for you?

Would you discard me after you are done with my feelings?

 

Am I just a toy for your own personnel pleasure?

To pull me out when your friends are bored.

 

Will you show me love and all that it is?

Will you be there when my need is so great?

 

Do not come to me and proclaim a love that is false.

Tell me the truth and I will love you forever.

Accept all that I am without questioning waiver.

 

Author's Note

Im hoping a certain person (I may or may not kow them yet) will answer.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Ron, I know I've told you this before. I'd rather be a fool than a nobody. And fools ? Yes, they sometimes are on strings, string up like a puppet. It's not always a nice feeling being suspended in the air and never knowing when you'll fall.

It's best to have a mutual friendship, one built on trust, equality, and empathy. :)

[Mizo4]

lovely poetry which questions and yearns for answers. nice job.

[ron]

I am hoping some one will one day. Call me a hopeless romantic.

[Mizo4]

nice poetry, hope you are having a good day

[ron]

As well as can be expected, and you?

[Mizo4]

yeah im good thanks, bit stressed have to rewrite my dissertation, feeling blue its 5 more marks to get but pretty ffing scary :( hate uni sometimes

[ron]

I know the feeling i spent four years at a collage.

[Mizo4]

cool what did you study

[ron]

I was an art major. Algebra is what sunk me. I could never understand it...

[Mizo4]

oh jinkies yeah i heard that in the usa you need to like study other diciplines in your degree like you major in say anthropolgy but you still need a science requirement etc i dont like that about the system tbh, here we just do our subject nothing else

[ron]

That would have been great. Maybe I should move there and try again.

[Mizo4]

could transfer ur credits

[ron]

And if I had the money to I belive I would. But for now I write or at least try to. And work at my 40 hour a week job which I am very blessed to have.

[Mizo4]

awww yeah, education should be free i think its sick to charge people to learn. Hope your well have a wonderful day

[ron]

Thank you. I think I might have a better day now. Thank you for the visit. I would love to hear from you again.

[RainDancer1997]

I like it:)! We ask these bc we do not want to be hurt by false love.

[ron]

Thank you. So very true.

[RainDancer1997]

your welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

I like questions in a poem and this is a good example...Well said...:)

[ron]

Thank you. They are questons to be answered, and contimplated. Im hoping a certain person (I dont kow them yet) will answer.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...You are welcome...:)