Alive in the Night

Alive in the Night

In the night, we are alive, soft kisses in the dim light.

Can you feel how my heart beats for you?

Take me slowly we have all night.

 

Slowly we shed the coverings of our masks’.

Always wanting, never hoping to see the truth just below the surface.

 

Take me with my scares and pain.

Hidden in the past but it remains.

Reveal to me your deepest desires. I will cherish all that you are.

Reveal to me in this moment.

 

Flames of passion, deep longings.

Come to me and throw off your reservations.

 

Let me see the real you.

Hide yourself not from my eyes.

 

Your touch, your dreams give to me all that you are.

Let me care for you, so that you can be free to show me the real you.

 

I would tell you words that hint of honey.

Express emotions deeper than even I have known.

Open my heart and expose my soul.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Flames of passion, deep longings.

Come to me and throw off your reservations.



Let me see the real you.

Hide yourself not from my eyes.



Your touch, your dreams give to me all that you are."
Your writes are full of love and passion imeasurable. A hopeless romantic will make a great poet too...Well done...:)

[ron]

Thank you. Ah the heart of a romantic poet, how they long to feel just a touch or taste of all they write and what remanis.

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:)

[Anand Sehgal]

Let me care for you, so that you can be free to show me the real you.

I would tell you words that hint of honey.
Express emotions deeper than even I have known.
Open my heart and expose my soul.
beautifully done :) loved it.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Anand Sehgal]

creator's burning flame of desire is very evident

[ron]

Not sure what you mean. How so?

[poetdoug]

I love this creative last verse especially:" I would tell you words that hint of honey. OPen my heart and expose my soul."
So passionate and compassionate.
Great writing my friend.

[ron]

Thank you.

[dw817]

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Once again another heartfelt, empathic, and emotional poem, Ron. :)

[ron]

Thank you.

[AnnaLeQuinn]

Lovely and sensual! As always you leave my heart feeling as though it has been pet!
Anna

[ron]

Thank you. My greatest joy and hope in writing is that it makes the reader feel something. I think you are the same way to.