Freedom

Freedom

Our freedom is like the winds blowing over the plains and across the shoals of our life.

It changes with the seasons and refuses to bend to the will of the mountains

It can shape its surroundings over time 

It cannot be suppressed or forced in one direction

How the higher powers have longed to control it

How they have hated it for being free

How they have wished they could be as powerful as is in its calmest time

And how they have hated it for its power to be free

Freedom in all its glory cannot be anything but what it is in its purest form.

Author's Note

I had a hard time deciding what Genre to put this under.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Freedom is pure, freedom shall only be that which allows us to embrace it in all its glory if we continue to embrace the liberty of our forefathers and their vision for us! There shall always be those who wish to take it away - we must hold onto it!!!

What Genre did you put this under? I am curious to know what you decided.

[ron]

I was hoping to get some addvice on what genre to place it under. Thank you for your words, your reviews are important to me. I am honored that some one such as you would grace my writings.

[Sheila Kline]

I would either place it under: Military & War, or Political, as you speak of freedom (military & war), and the higher powers (political)...help this helps you! I have several in both genre.

[ron]

Good choices I think Political is were I will put it because I wrote it last year when some kinf of Political abuse of the constitution was going on. Thank you.

[Blissful Sin]

:') oh my, how wonderful!! Great work yet again!!

-Bliss

[ron]

THank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Words of truth written in a wonderful poetic language...Thank you for penning...:)

[ron]

Thank you. I'm hoping to have enough poems (101) to compile into a book soon.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...You are welcome...:)