Caught

Caught

Caught in your gentle embrace.

Coaxing me closer.

Soft touch of your supple lips sends signals of your anticipation.

Your heart beating lets me know, your love for me that starts to glow.

Trembling fingers of hesitation gives me strength past my hesitation.

Moaning in the still of the night, thrusts me in to your mornings light.

Angle kisses share their gifts from thee.

Passion building hesitation waning. 

Reluctance gives way to knowing touches.

Walls torn down in the heat of the fray.

Giving in to long waited dreams.

Love coming to its conclusion.

Waking up to see you are not there.

Caught in your final embrace.

Reviews

[poetdoug]

"Moaning in the still of the night, thrusts me in to your mornings light." You do have a wonderful way of rhyming without allowing the rhyming words to take over. Thanks for sharing this love-filled poem.
"Caught in your final embrace." What a great climax!

[ron]

Thank you. I have to give some credit for reading Dr Suse while I was growing up.

[s y e]

You are literally the cutest little romantic man ever... You got it bad dude, this was so sweet, romantic and cute. Everything I just called you I guess, aha. ;-) I loved this.

[ron]

I forgot about writing this one. OMG you are really digging in to my early stuff.

[s y e]

I told you I would be. I am in love with your poems.

[ron]

-blushing really bad- You make my heart and soul smile. You really are my sweetheart.

[s y e]

Awh, that's too cute! Happy to make you smile, Ron.

[ron]

Thank you and you are most welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"Soft touch of your supple lips sends signals of your anticipation.

Your heart beating lets me know, your love for me that starts to glow.

Trembling fingers of hesitation gives me strength past my hesitation.

Moaning in the still of the night, thrusts me in to your mornings light.

Angle kisses share their gifts from thee."
I do like the sentiments and the wording in this wonderful poem...Pen on...:)

[ron]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[dw817]

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Dude, what can I say but - you got it bad, and I do mean good. Here's hoping you find someone to share your bounteous and beautiful words with as they are fraught and frayed with passion, audition, and definitely submission. Someone somewhere is gonna sweep you off your feet, and I don't mean a timid and timorous maid with a broom but the buxom driver of a powered street sweeper. :)

[ron]

Thank you but I dont think I would ever get that lucky.

[dw817]

Well as someone once told me, it's a lot more difficult to find someone interesting inside your home than out. You have to get outside more often, meet more people, go to more parties and attend more social events - because the more contact you make, the better the chance you have of finding Mr. or Mrs. Pleased-To-Meecha.

[Wall of Words]

I really like this poem. Why? Because 1) you don't have to decipher a whole bunch of metaphor and similes to figure out what the point of the poem is and 2) The story the poem tells is vague enough to make it seem like your reading a poem (not a story).
Very nicely done.
Sylvia.

[ron]

Thank you very much. I dont plane for any of my writings to come out a certain way. I just start writing and try to make it sound at least ok. So I cant take credit for that (I wish I could). But thank you for a detailed review of the peice.

[Wall of Words]

The pleasure is all mine. :)