Crushing

This is a poem I can definately relate to. Its about having a major crush on someone you know will never like you back, and even though you know that, you can't get over them.

I see you walk by,

My heart starts to race.

You don't notice me,

But I notice everything about you

 Your body, the way you move, your face.

I can't help but wonder.

Wonder if you've ever noticed me.

Wonder if you know I exist.

Or am I just another girl with a crush on you?

Is it even worth it?

I know you'll never feel the same way.

Yet...

I can't stay away.

 

Author's Note

Okay, I'd love for some tips on how to improve. But if you didn't like it and you don't want to give me advice on how to improve, please don't say anything.

Reviews

[krish]

Wow, that's a nice write. Hey, do you have someone ? lol if yes, then he's gonna mad at you if he too reads your this write that's totally for him, :) what a great write, totally came right from bottom of your heat.
well written, great job. 100/100 :)!
keep writing.

[Cassie W.]

Thank you so much :) No, I don't have somebody. But I am crushing on someone really hard, and that's what this poem stands for :)

[krish]

My pleasure :)
Hahah ... okey dokey ! yeah, that's a poem for someone and if you don;t have then it's really a great Imaginary that;s done by you dear one. you've got it. Hey, keep writing.
I' wanna read your some more writes before i leave this site..Hahah :)

[Cassie W.]

Awh thanks! I'll try to write a lot more before you leave