Time to call it quits

Time to call it quits

A Poem by Lina
"

About trying to end something. No matter what it is.

"

We lay awake at night

thinking 

how to make this right

knowing

nothing we can do

will turn all this around


I know we said I do, 

but sometimes you have to choose

between the dream inside your heart

and the song inside your shoe.

Your brain is going right,

your foot is going straight,

your falling out of sight

and I know I’m getting through


Coz you see there’s a hole where the moon used to be

because the cheese melted when, the sun came out again

I know it makes no sense now, but remember when


we lay awake at night, thinking

how to make this right, knowing

Nothing we can do

could turn all this around.


Greater things came to an end

so there’s no shame to call it quits

The fun has just begun

with the new love of your life

Dont make it all collapse 

with my presence in your life


I know we said I do,

but I think there’s a clue

that maybe for me and you

it’s time to say I dont 

© 2011 Lina


Author's Note

Lina
Ok, so this is a song like poem thing. Eloquently put, I know... Ummm, let me know what you think! It's very raw, and this is only draft 1... not sure if there will be a draft 2 or 10... I guess the reviews will help me decide! So please do review..

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Added on December 31, 2011
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Lina
Lina

Amman, -, Jordan



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