Life, love, people and death

The journey of a cub

The forest is full of tall trees that are enhanced through the echo made by the crispy ground that one little bear cub is wandering through. Whilst sniffing around for his daily hunt, the cub is surrounded by the musky smells and the scents of pine that surround the forest. As he looks up to wonder where mama bear and papa bear are, he find the shiny stars and the twinkle of the moon looking back at him, engulfing him with reassurance. He swats away the insects that try to find comfort in the warmth of his breath and continues with his journey. He finds a long waterfall and is confused! The twinkle of the stars seem to be on the surface of this waterfall, but he is looking down! He finds that it is merely a reflection of the stars that he was using for guidance. The water seems transparent, and clean enough to drink from! So one sip, two sips and then he notices the rocks that are at the bottom of the water and that surround the waterfall... As his eyes move to the ground, he finds that he is the color of the ground; so much so that he can blend in with it perfectly! He finds shelter in a hole that he digs that is like an underground cave.

He wakes up in the morning to find a large wall in the middle of the forest, made of stones! This wall is six trees wide and almost as tall as the trees, but not quite... He finds it interesting and sneaks slyly towards it to explore it whilst keeping an eye on a bird that is sitting on the very top of the wall. He finds that it has many shades of grey! After walking around it a few times, he decides that he wants to lean on it! So he does, and finds it stable. Leaning on the tall grey wall, he ponders his existence whilst mama bear and papa bear are looking down at him from the stars.

Author's Note

Grammer might be a bit off! Let me know what you think... This is based off a test that an old man in cyprus gave me... consistent of four questions about a forest that symbolises life, water that symbolises love, a cub that is a symbol of people, and a wall that defies and is defined as death!

Reviews

[Ian]

That was great! A little hard to follow, but great!
Good job>