Silence

Music always ends in silence

For the man who stands but to hide,

Careless for all except memory,

Her careless silence, head on his chest

And that is how he wants it, how he needs it.

Reviews

[Wrdlvr]

simple and concise. beautiful.

[emmajoy]

Silence .. shhh .. and described just how it should be .. needed, valued.

There's something special in listening to anything truly loved or appreciated, then, sit, lie, bathing in its silent post wonder .. and in your mind it's still there .. somehow.

A beautiful post.

[Coyote Poetry]

Silence can be a good peace. Also can be a prison. I like the ending. In the safety of a prison. Silence become your only friend. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful, silence to hear everything, silence to hear beauty, to feel sweetness, to taste the melodic spaces between heartbeats.

[Pax Analog]

Dare I say silence is golden.

If it's of the two hearts beating as one kind -- or even one heart beating calmly.

Despite the soul-soothing qualities of soaking up mountainous nature's tall trees, it seems many people underestimate, undervalue silence, the eloquence of stillness.

The priceless moments are when love poises us between the luscious music of desire, and the wisdom of silence.

[TBird J.]

I feel his need coming of the page just through these few lines

[Nobody.]

goood stuff. intimate and shattering.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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Anna's cool hey. Hi ya down there precious... anyway. This breathes in the between, so elegant. I'd always thought silence is deafening in the noise it engenders. To the soul that never sleeps and the deep oceans of memory we keep. Forelorn... rendered.

*************************************** In short Form Harmonies ********************************

Write On / Right On! Romon in Review... sleepless @ 4:20 am how we need it...Sometimes as the music plays on and words flow where they will to go. Silent.

[Alice.Valkyrie]

gentle, soft and beauty-filled, that peace.

[Anna]

Umm well then I am just going to say it was very nice lol I am not sure why others write other things..it is weird. But great job!