My beautiful woman and our forever tomorrow.

I still reminisce those long walks at night,
the beach then would be so quiet,
I held your hand and pulled you close,
and so did the moon to sea across the shore
Searching your sky blue eyes for something,
Whilst warm summer breeze flowing akin,
your lips parted a smile so serene,
And that's how I found what was gone.

I knew it then loving you would never,
be a simple question to comprehend,
I never wanted those days to end,
while looking at our tomorrow forever.

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very sweet n beautiful read, you expressed it so nicely, good job mate

[*CrazyBeautiful*]

"Very Sweet"..Simple..but SWEET!! :) Thanks for sharing...

[Jamestown]

Very nice and emotions explained great, keep up the good work.

[wordman]

a sweet poem of love I know she will love it

[Lindsey Nguyen]

That was really wonderful! :)

[Amy Rose]

So sweet I love it! I love the emotion :)
You're loved one is lucky :)

[Chandler bing]

Thanks ag I also hope she does :)

[Mr. Box]

I really love this. The rhyme, the emotions, and your choices of words. They are all impeccable.

[Chandler bing]

Ha thanks man :)

[Mr. Box]

your welcome (y)

[Claire384]

Wow! What a soulful poem I love the way you described the main protaganist and the love of his life :)
So sweet what you have written for your lady love(I guess haha)

[Chandler bing]

Hey thanks for reviewing...and yes it is!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Took me on a journey of appreciation and need. Real love should create fear at first. To learn new dance and emotion open the doors to the unknown. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry this early morning.
Coyote

[Chandler bing]

Thanks cp :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.