My beautiful woman and our forever tomorrow.

I still reminisce those long walks at night,
the beach then would be so quiet,
I held your hand and pulled you close,
and so did the moon to sea across the shore
Searching your sky blue eyes for something,
Whilst warm summer breeze flowing akin,
your lips parted a smile so serene,
And that's how I found what was gone.

I knew it then loving you would never,
be a simple question to comprehend,
I never wanted those days to end,
while looking at our tomorrow forever.

Reviews

[Zanne]

A nice short sweet poem, Nicky written :)

[kick your buttercup]

I felt like I was actually there. Amazing job I love you're poem's.

[Dreamgirl23732]

I could almost see the scene playing in front of me! A truly beautiful poem.

[Thatonegirl97]

I love what you did with this poem it is so beautiful

[Mayank]

I like the way the love is found here, it probably looks the pain of lost love is gone and new one enters.

[T. Adams]

FIrst, Love your pseudonym. I really enjoyed this poem. The precise imagery used to describe the lover allows the reader to easily understand the admirer's emotions. Well done.

[Kendralokai]

Very nice use of imagery.

[Mandi]

I like your word use in this poem, very detailed. It definitely creates a beautiful scene in the mind.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A cherishing piece that lays heavy on the heart, well done, good read.

[stars are far]

That romantic poem was very beautiful and I believe that as long as you are in love you will be feeling that you are living forever, you feel like life is within the eyes you are falling for.
that was very beautiful work. Keep that coming :)