RUNAWAY STAR

NONE WHATSOEVER.

                                                         RUNAWAY STAR

In the winter murk,

Along the turf,

standing alone,

Unheard and unharmed,

looking at the starry sky,

with infinite possibilities,

I see a shooting star,

Burning with ardor,

Desolate and driven,

That astronomical marvel,

With it's majestic tail,

Made a sudden trail,

So near yet so far,

Moments later,

It was gone,

Unheard and unharmed.

Author's Note

One of the random stuff.

Reviews

[Kotite]

I really like the parallels between you and the star and how when it comes down to it we're here and gone in a flash; or in your case, there and gone in a flash. I didn't see any of the recent reviews touch on the fact that you used the same line to describe your coming there to the star appearing so I just thought I'd note that and give ya some credit ^.^

[TurtleClark]

i can picture the star in my head and know just how fast things so magnificent can disappear and cease to exist............brilliant

[Moiz Rasheed]

Brilliant.....good use of the words

[Rida Sarwar]

even your random work is awesome! :P keep it up! :D

[Praveeta]

Beautifully written.

The lines:

That astronomical marvel,
With it's majestic tail,
Made a sudden trail,
So near yet so far,

is worth reading again and again.

[Chris]

It didn't feel random at all...

[Saddam]

and it is true star of shine... loveya

[wordman]

and it makes a beautiful view

[Michael Oliver]

Ah yes - walking home and the sudden blaze of sparks - yes yes yes

[Julie Spade]

Breathtaking and beautiful, you are an amazing poet with flow and passion ! I read this a few times and it still feels fresh and new as if it were the first TIME ! Good Job & Keep going !

[Chandler bing]

I am so glad you liked it...

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Painted a wonderful image in my mind:) Awesome job:)

[Chandler bing]

Thank you sir I really appreciate it..

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Your very welcome