Watching Porn-1(REVISED)

Experiences of boy who is in his early teen and is surrounded by religious fanatics with "watching porn"

                                                         Watching Porn

Last night I did something brash,

and this time I couldn't give it a pass,

My libido was slovenly flowing through,

I knew this moment of manic would be rued,

I cursed my conscience called it an imbecile pervert,

but that incongruous tension wouldn't just divert,

My fingers trembled as I made the move,

And my eyes rolled around whilst I wouldn't be screwed.

Now I had entered the lair of seductresses,

For I was Incognito so I left no traces,

Making a choice now seemed so absurd,

Everything is ominous I murmured.

That unsavory stuff did lend me,

Some sparse moments of serenity,

But the ruefulness had already started,

Now it would be hard to carve it.

 

This would be a little secret to myself I thought,

Hoping it won't turn into an addiction I sobbed, 

Watching porn is no big deal I grumbled,

Everyone does it then why should I be troubled?

 

Author's Note

Frankly speaking many of us share a love-hate relationship with porn.I don't know whether it is good or bad but what I do know is that for some it is an ominous necessary. This for the "some of us".

Reviews

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I really liked this one. I love how you encompassed the shame that religious people make young teens feel. To me, watching porn, is better then going out and sleeping with diffrent people and catching some sort of disease. If "bible thumpers", as I like to call them, would open their eyes and see it the logical way, teens wouldn't feel shame.
Don't get me wrong, I'm a christian. I fully believe there is a God, but I also believe he's more willing to forgive you pleasuring yourself, than being promiscus...

[Michael Oliver]

Ah the trapped reality between our genes programming of out senses an the cultural programming of their created morals - I know I know I know

[SAYED THANGAL]

well designed and narrated poem

[SAYED THANGAL]

well designed and narrated poem

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah sex and guilt. Where would the catholic church be without it?.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Hey this is actually a very true...everyone is guilty...why should a single person suffer? I salute you for taking up such a bold topic and writing so well about it.

[Maddi Snowden]

Interesting poem. Not nearly as graphic or vulgar as one might think. Well written.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Buddy, I can be certain when I say this. This is one of the best portrayals of conflicting thoughts and brilliantly penned emotions I have ever seen. You've made something like watching porn a great thought provoking act with the help of this poem. You've shown a brilliant subtlety in the act of watching porn with the help of this poem, and have got the emotions spot on for many people who are watching porn for the first time.

I also love the way you've played around with the font sizes in this poem.

[kumars]

did you like it to commit that you enjoyed it.

[Michael Stevens]

Watching porn is a little like dining at a nice Chinese restaurant; fills you up, but an hour later you're hungry again; a fine poem!

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

good Write, Keep up the good work.