Mindfulness - Haiku

Updated

Aware of breathing
  Observing thoughts and feelings

    Like clouds in the sky

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is simply beautiful to me.

[Rogie-Dodge]

Thanks you so much Brittany. I'm glad you liked it :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Is it supposed to be "as the drift away"? or did you forget the "Y" in they?Otherwise very nice:P

[Rogie-Dodge]

Ooops... fixing it now !!
Thanks !!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:P

[Rogie-Dodge]

I've changed it completely now .. I think I like the new version better :D