Footprints

Footprints

A Poem by Davi Rodrigues
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This is kind of a haiku I wrote for a theme-trade. My classmate said it sucks, but he didn't get the symbols...

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Intriguing it is
To find footprints in the woods
Is it good or bad?

© 2012 Davi Rodrigues


Author's Note

Davi Rodrigues
Ignore the question, I know it shouldn't have ended that way. But I couldn't figure a better way.

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I think your classmate is wrong and has caused you to doubt your words. i think it is an excellent ending. I would certainly not wish to come accross footprints in the woods, unless of course, i needed assistance. The point you make is valid and it is indeed an intriguing write. thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think your classmate is wrong and has caused you to doubt your words. i think it is an excellent ending. I would certainly not wish to come accross footprints in the woods, unless of course, i needed assistance. The point you make is valid and it is indeed an intriguing write. thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 11, 2012
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Tags: Analogy, Haiku, Footprint

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Davi Rodrigues
Davi Rodrigues

Brasilia, DF, Brazil



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