I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by Davi Rodrigues

Hello, my dear
Says the old man
When his grandchild
Comes to his house

Eat more, my dear
Says kind gran-gran
Putting more stuff
Into his plate

It will be wild
When they find out
That kid's not tough
As fits their taste

© 2012 Davi Rodrigues


Author's Note

Davi Rodrigues
Does anybody know what poetic form this is?
Three stanzas with four lines each. Each line has four syllables (metric hint).
Three stanzas. First two stanzas present the scene. Third stanza shows reflection (semantic hint).

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I really have no clue what poetic form this is :I
But it sounds nice :L
Those grandparents are in for a shock...hope they don't hate that kid, because that really would be a shame.
Good, strong literary write, gives a subject on which to muse and a story to be told.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Davi Rodrigues
Davi Rodrigues

Brasilia, DF, Brazil



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I like writing in English, don't know why. Sometimes I think I write better in English than in my own language. Portuguese is not so much my thing. more..

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