the unspoken

Words unspoken
Words untold
Truths are hiding in a hole
In a hole of darkness
In a hole of lust
those words get left there in the dust
There never said
There never told
There always there left alone
Trying to push out
But they never make that move
lying there in the darkness of the unknown
Its unseen but it could be known
If those words make there move
for now there left in the big black hole of dust

Reviews

[Shante Payne]

I really like this. So many things are left unspoken and that is really such a shame. We shouldn't hold back our feelings.

PS. the poem would read a lot better if you use the correct homophones for there, their, they're.
"They're never said etc"
"for now they're left" etc
Other than that great write.

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In a hole of darkness
In a hole of lust
those words get left there in the dust

I really loved these words here, this whole writing was amazing.
Like it alot, filled with alot of emotion.