anymore

you cant tell me what to do
you cant tell me how to dress
you cant tell me how to live my life
I personaly dont need that

this world I did not create
but Ill live as if I did
so here I am on my own again
standing in regret with blood on my hands

i dont need this
anymore
and you did this
thats for sure

why do you make me feel this way
why do you do this to me
why are you so far away
this will be our final day cause...


i dont need this
anymore
and you did this
thats for sure

Reviews

[melissa]

wonderful write!!!

[Ruth]

iI like this a lot, the contradiction is great, an excellent poem:)

[just rose.]

I like the repetition in this a lot and wow, you tell it like it is. is this a song too? regardless, it's a great poem!!