crowded head

This crowded head
Is yet so hollow
It's hard to speak
Hard to swallow

I don't know what to say
I wish this pain will go away
But yet it seems to stay
Why won't it just go just away?

These lyrics express
The way that I feel
So listen close
because this is real

You wanna know about my life
You wanna know about me
Well look close
'cause here's your chance to see

I'm an average kid
That's been through a lot of s**t
But all-in-all
Everyone forgets

That I have feelings
And I have a heart
And this s**t
Is tearing me apart

Some things will never die . . . . . .

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. I'll be reviewing a few of your pieces.. but what passion! You have some tremendous writings going out.. full of great rhythm and rhyme. If this song was written to a lost love.. well it sure has impact that's bound to stir emotions! Well done!