you

you

A Poem by Rockman13881

what do you want from me
where do we go from here
here i am again
thinking about you

what more do i have to give
ive given up on everything in my life
cause i can never be satisfied
with what i have in life
i gave up on a girl that loved me
just to help out a friend
now ill leave to suffer the consiquences
of giving everything away

i want you, i need you
so girl please let me love you
cause your all i got in life
and without you i might as well die

theres a peice of me missing
without you by my side
and no one else can give
what you did to me

i dont want no over the counter love
to help me deal with my pain
i just put the pen to the paper
cause its all a part of me

© 2010 Rockman13881


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Can I suggest that you change "i dont want no over the counter love" to "I don't want any over the counter love." Other than that, I really liked it...I got from it, that it was bout the type of person who gives and gives, but hardly ever takes, and when they do take they either feel selfish or give it away for someone else to be happy...
Reminds me of myself...Eh

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Rockman13881
Rockman13881

Moscow, PA



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hello all i am 21, music is a big factor in my life, its always there when i need it and i use it to help express me. if you'd like to contact me: aim - rockman13881 : yahoo - skull_rocker2001 more..

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A Poem by Rockman13881