i'll see you soon

i dont know where you are

and i cant see you

but you cant be very far

somehow i feel you

 

my dreams shift around

believe me, i know

but as much as they want me to

i cant let you go

 

i cant wait to hear your voice

for our constant stares to linger

to dance to no noise

for our perfect picture

 

i cant wait for our kisses

and our stupid fights

i cant wait to hold hands

and to hold you at night

 

so ill just sit here and wait

wish every night and day

and one day it will happen

ill see you soon, ok?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. When we miss and need someone. Leave a yearning for the thing we can't feel and have. I like how you described your desire in the poem.
'i cant wait to hear your voice
for our constant stares to linger
to dance to no noise
for our perfect picture"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[TheRavenQueer]

Reminds me of someone I'm missing.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A nice poem that captures longing so well :)

[∂αʌ<..]

a good poem ...still i fell it can be much much more better than that!
else...a good poem which reminds me about a lost love!

[TheElfPrincess]

Some capitalation and punctuation mistakes, yet a good poem.

[Black Arrow]

I like made me think of my ex

[watch_the_world]

This is cute :D