annabell

Annabell was born today
With healthy smiles and laughter
Shes taken home and put to bed
With a happy mother and father

Annabell starts school today
Only five shes growing old
She finds some friends who seem nice
And she does what she is told

Annabell comes home from school
Shes ten years old today
Her mom and dad yell and scream
But she blocks out what they say

Annabell starts middle school
Shes lost and on her own
She walks these hallways looking down
Keeping the cuts from being shown

Annabell tried meth today
To heal a broken heart
She didn't think shed get addicted
Now its something she cant part

Annabell lost her virginity
To a man with no name
It took two seconds, nothing more
She never wanted it this way

Annabell found a guy
Who turned her life around
Now shes walking down the isle
With a smile, showing shes proud

Author's Note

don't give up hope <3

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a strong story. Life allow us to learn many things. Still need to be careful. Life is a constant learning experience. If we are lucky. We will land on our feet. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great piece. I thought you did a really nice job on it. I liked the repetition as well. Good write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Linda]

Nicey, and likey so much xxx

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice write this, the repetition made it cute and bright. Simple yet extraordinary.

[francinebc]

Very beautiful.
simple, yet incredibly deep, easy to read.
flow is great.
well done x

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the story of this poem, with a wonderful ending. Great stuff:)

[J. Ghalden]

This was... Excellent. You are very talented. I don't even know what else to say, but to keep going and I'm gonna end up reading all your work. xD *Thumbs up*

[Princess LouLou]

AWEHHHHH! THATS AMAMZING. Now i have to ask does she get raped when or does she have sex like a s**t? and i was wondering how old was this girl when she lost it... you know just or interst purposes. :)
I like it. Shes such an emo, thats a shame.