living with a liar

You've confessed once
Cause i found out
But the others
You haven't come clean about

I thought i could trust you
I guess not, i see
Cause the entire time
You were laughing at me

Behind that mask
Is a man i want to know
Not someone covered
With only perfections to show

I cant be mad
I cant be upset
But living with a liar
Makes me believe in the rest

Reviews

[FROST]

Wow... the last two lines really blow me away. You are amazingly good.

[LeaflessTree]

Great poem.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good show..!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are lucky if you catch a liar. Most liars are so twisted up by their lies. Best to create distance. Liars won't change. I like this poem. To realize all you will get is lies. Allow you to prepare for the next lie. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I know how you feel because I have been cheated on a couple of times and well it's not pretty...it's always hurtful. This also had a good flow to it. So good job. Thanks for sharing.

[Emily Rae]

I really like "behind that mask is a man I want to know not someone covered with only perfections to show"-- facades suck

[masqued_muse]

She RHYMES! She Rhymes!! (DOES THE HAPPY DANCE).haha. i live for the rhymes, to be honest I can't really write without them...this piece was amazing.It has a good theme, flow and imagery. You don't use punctuation. Too restrictive, huh? You know the wisdom you have acquired from what life has handed you, don't let the doubters bring negativity to your celebration..

[Helen Woodward]

It is better not to live with a liar, once you catch them out at a lie...LEAVE!
Your last line is a grabber...well done!

Cheers xxxooxxx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Lovely flow to this poem and so relatable. Great read:)