music

music

A Poem by just take a breath

when the world turns around
there's a song that it turns to
a beat.
a melody.
a dream.

when a smile forms a face
a pianos being played
pure happiness.
joy.
freedom.

when he walks her down the isle
a wedding ring placed on her hand
the wedding bells sing there chime
the music of newly weds

© 2011 just take a breath


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just take a breath
http://www.flickr.com/photos/allyrose18/179537772/ <--- photo credit

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This is my favorite one of you !! I really really like the opening statement, it is well portrayed and the whole really keeps on the theme the whole way. The imagery is easily imagined with your wordplay. And to top it off, the form is excellent ( it reads very well, well spaced out )
This is impressing ! Write some more !!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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