tears

tears

A Poem by just take a breath

every moment, there's a girl
crying her eyes out to the world
wishing on a star
to be where he is

everyday a tear is shed
because that heart of theirs
was smashed instead

every month, somebody dies
because heartache hits them
so hard, it takes lives

every year, someones forgotten
the person someone loved is gone
and there over it...
they move on


© 2011 just take a breath


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just take a breath
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Brilliant piece~ I love the worrdding as well~

Posted 13 Years Ago


every month, somebody dies
because heartache hits them
so hard, it takes lives

I like this poem. The verse above is the sad truth. Especially for those that have lost a lifetime spouse to death. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I doubt if they are just over it. They shed their tears in private, perhaps later than when you shed yours. Lovely poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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