forget it all

forget it all

A Poem by just take a breath

so surrounded by the worlds hate
we forget about the simple things

remember the heart shaped glasses on summer days?
running barefooted outside?
laughing so hard you cry?

lets forget all the hardships
lets forget it all...

© 2011 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
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Even though it was short, it was beautiful and heartwarming. :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


WOnderful write! great work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short yet very well written. I love it. Made me remember some of the best things that I've forgotten. Most especially during my childhood days. :) Good times.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this was quite uplifting work, i just love this piece. man this sure was great, those sweet memories are the ones we should be treasuring all our lives. this reminded me of these song lyrics:
"How do I say goodbye to what we had?
The good times that made us laugh
Outweigh the bad..."
and from that same song:
"And I'll take with me the memories
To be my sunshine after the rain..."
- "It's So Hard To Say Goodbye To Yesterday" by Boys II Men
nice work!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


As people it seems we only remember the bad times, like when a couple breaks up they remember how cold and mean each other was to each other but they forget how their heart sung out loud with joy when they first met. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hmmmm...the good times get us through the bad times. Nicely said!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very true, sometimes I even forget to do this..

Posted 13 Years Ago


right on! or should I say "word!" The simplicity of this is its strength and its restoration back to a harmonious state

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's great. Speaks to and from the heart.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Believe me, I'm more than willing to forget. Loved the message of this poem and the imagery too! I like the length too.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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