talkin to the stars

everyone's gone
just me sitting here
with the shining stars above me

that one is for our first kiss
that ones for the first time we said i love you
and that one? the first time you saw me cry.

the thing is,
i wonder if your doing what im doing.
i want to know if your looking at the same star as i am

i just want it to be over
i want to stop missing you
but im running out of ways to not

so ill sit here,
as much as it kills me,
talkin to the stars

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=stars&order=9&offset=24#/d1ngf59 <--- photo credit

Reviews

[Dani]

This is a very sincere piece - though I usually don't care for poems about love, I can relate to this one. It reminds me of that restlessness when you miss somebody - whether they're from a relationship or something else - and reflecting on that very feeling.

I like reading your poetry. So far, each poem feels like a progression. It's interesting to see which way your writing turns every time you come up with a new piece. Keep it up.

[cassandra violet]

i absolutely loved this. The entire thing really hit home for me.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very well expressed- and honest. Great job~

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great Poem well exspressed!

[Sarah Jane]

I love this, I sometimes look in the sky and wonder if who I miss is loking up there too:) Very beautiful

[Sevendayspast]

I really liked it! It reminded me of what i'm going through right now!! Get up the good work budd

-Chuck w.