this boy i know

this boy i know

A Poem by just take a breath

so theirs this boy i know
i met him a few days back

his hair is brown and long
as i stare into his eyes...
he stares back

his smile is to the side
he plays the drums
music is his life

he loves god with all his heart
a few days ago i met this boy
 i feel like iv known him forever

when he talks im not alone
and the butterfly's take over

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=love#/d284fcb <--- photo credit

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Somehow this has simplicity and complexity. How you did that I don't know. I guess that's just what good writers do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can't even explain how similar this poem is to something, and someone, I know. Plus, you wrote it really beautifully.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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