hold me

when i dream, i dream of him
his brown hair that falls to the length of his chin
his deadly ways, and hurtful sins

when i think, i think of us
holding hands
me thinking of love...
you? lust

when i cry, i cry for me
with you gone
all i have are mental scars
and memories

when i sing, i quiver slightly
the words of a song i love
ruined by you
nip and bite me

when i remember, i remember the truth
you weren't worth it

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=hold+me#/d29w38y <-- photo credit

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved the emotion and depth in this poem. It brought an awaken alert in my heart, but it's a good thing. The way the words flowed throughout the poem was magnificent. :)

~Lizzard~

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...this is really good stuff. I like how you bring us in and out of the dream, thoughts, tears and even the love song. Magnificent!

[Dreamer<3]

I agree with Olive(:

[Olive Belikov]

Tells so much truth. It's true some guys can seem like their worth the pain and he hurt, but there really not.
Great job.