control me

you take my hands
my arms
my legs

hold them in yours
you gently go your ways

you speak your words
with my breath

you use my legs
with your every step

don't control me
im my own person
don't tell me what to do
i want to be free

don't control my body
my mind
my movements

don't control me.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting. You give a good visual of taking over another body. After all isn't that what control is trying to do? Nice write!

[Sarah Jane]

I love this, it floes so nice, and I feel the same way

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written,flows so smoothly!

[Olive Belikov]

love it... it flows just right.

[Dreamer<3]

I really really like this. It has a lot of meaning and it's realllllly good.

[MissWordSmith]

this was beautifully sad.
When you say ''don't control me" I can hear you whispering it, almost as if you mean "I trust you to control me, but don't, I'm my own person"