push it away

push it away

A Poem by just take a breath

people move around me

but i feel like im invisible

 

i open my eyes

just to close them again

hiding what i see

 

slow motion through this hallway

im down on my knees

forgetting what is left

screaming

 

i want to me somewhere else

i want to float away

i want to lie in bed

get lost in my dreaming ways

 

i want them to go away

the parents

the friends

 

i want to  push these things away

i want the insanity to end

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
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" I open my eyes
Just to close them again
Hiding what I see" One of my favorite set of words. ever

Posted 13 Years Ago


i want to be somewhere else
i want to float away
i want to lie in bed
get lost in my dreaming ways


i like this stanza.. i feel like this a lot. good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this one has a very honest feel to it, especially in the first stanza and last three stanzas. hang in there. life is a great comedy when you step back and look at it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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